Comments on: Haiku Monday #2

By: Meggan

Meggan — Tue, 28 Oct 2008 16:10:56 +0000

Tried writing poem
Yesterday before I left
It did not go well

cbakes — Tue, 28 Oct 2008 15:45:42 +0000

back from vacation
jelly bellys on my desk
time for trick-or-treat

KKBK — Tue, 28 Oct 2008 15:15:25 +0000

And so it begins
Four more days until Friday
I miss James’ singing

Taken from Pants — Tue, 28 Oct 2008 00:23:07 +0000

man enter airport

if walk through turnstile sideways

going to Bangkok

pants — Tue, 28 Oct 2008 00:19:19 +0000

Hang my head in shame
My last Haiku… “too racy”
I got the edit

pants — Mon, 27 Oct 2008 23:55:57 +0000

You lookin’ at me?
You cruisin’ for a foosin’?
shoot the for the moon…

Garrett — Mon, 27 Oct 2008 23:34:40 +0000

How to write Haiku
I tell you it’s five seven five
and syllable based!

Easy — Mon, 27 Oct 2008 23:26:07 +0000

can’t work late tonight.

too many obligations.

(monday night football)

Mary — Mon, 27 Oct 2008 23:22:57 +0000

We cannot forget
the importance of Haiku
Mondays at eROI.

Sydney — Mon, 27 Oct 2008 23:19:31 +0000

Halloween candy
I cannot stop eating it
ooh my stomach hurts